Pango's battle

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This is amazingly awesome!
The perspective is absolutely glorious~
I love Pango's pose and the way the 'parasite' almost looks like it's smiling (I don't know if you did that intentionally, but it looks damn awesome xD).
Most of the details on Pango are quite clear and easy to see, although there are some parts that come across looking a little messy or rushed.
The wings, for example, seem to lack detail when compared to say his head or legs. Adding a little more feather texture or something of the like would fix that up in a jiffy. C:
I also notice that Pango's wing arm appears rather small and... Weak. :E
By making the 'arm' slightly longer and the muscles more defined, it should help make him look a little more manly. xD
Also, the pose that the 'parasite' (or whatever that creepy-looking thing is) seems a little unclear. I'm not to sure what I'm looking at. Perhaps some more contrasty highlights and shades would help clear that up. C:
Anyway...
A very fine job overall.
I really do love the way you painted Pango's mouth, it looks quite realistic. c:
Good-luck in the Competition too, I'm adoring all your entries so far. <3